Monday, November 16, 2015

Family Friday and decorating bags for God's Love We Deliver!

Thursday, November 12, 2015

Memoir Checklist

Here is a link to the checklist that you can view in Google Drive.  I hope this works!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AAo7nwbLExdwposjupvTvuSYO-KPGXDLqYLbBLe-L6I/edit?usp=sharing

If you need the checklist for this Monday's published piece...

Memoir Publishing Checklist for _________________# _______Class_______
Writing Feature
Goal for this Feature
Self-
Evaluation
Overall
I wrote a story of an important moment or moments and it reads like a story (even though it’s true).
Lead
I wrote an interesting beginning that lures in my reader, gives clues to what’s happening and where, and clues to what happens later.
Transitions
I used transitional phrases to show time passing and for flashbacks and flash-forwards.
Ending
I gave readers a sense of closure. My ending connects to the main part of the story – it shares a lesson or realization or reflection.
Organization
I used paragraphs to separate different times in the story and with  
dialogue. Some parts of the story are longer and more developed than others.
Elaboration
I developed characters, setting and plot in my story.  I used a  
blend of dialogue, internal thinking, descriptive details and action.
Craft-
Internal Thinking
I revealed more about my characters by including their thinking and feeling.
Craft –
Slowing Down
I slowed down big moments. I made more important parts longer, and less important parts shorter.

Craft – Precise Details
I used very specific words and figurative language so readers could picture the characters, setting and events. I used objects and symbolism in my writing.
Craft – Varied Sentences
I varied my sentences and paragraphs to create pace and tone in my narrative.
Spelling
I used partners and dictionaries to help me edit my writing.
Punctuation
I used commas, quotation marks, periods, questions marks and exclamation marks as needed.
Understanding
I have written the name of NYC’s mayor somewhere on this sheet to show that I have read each of my writing goals.
Your published piece will need:
- A Cover that is neat and eye-catching with your name, title and class #
- A Catchy Title (Don’t use “The First Time I…” for your title!
- A Dedication
-An About the Author Page
-To be edited by two people
-This checklist attached

Friday, October 30, 2015

307 met their buddies from Ms. David's first grade class today.

Thursday, October 29, 2015

Scenes from our City Hall trip!

Saturday, October 17, 2015

Scenes from the Boo Bash.

Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Happy Wedding Day, Ms. Marucci! Here are some of the sketches kids made of their teacher's big day :) Thanks to everyone for sending in treats and card for our celebration.

Thursday, October 1, 2015

Our first music class with Ms. Gabel was a blast!

Friday, September 25, 2015

Scenes from last week's community skits.

Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Happy First School Day!

The teachers are all excited to meet the new fifth graders! We will be posting some of our new school year's happenings soon! Stay tuned...

Thursday, June 18, 2015

Our 154 Ballroom Dance team rules! We won our FIRST dancing trophy ever tonight in Manhattan.

Saturday, June 13, 2015

Summer Reading Ideas!

http://www.readbrightly.com/the-ultimate-summer-reading-list-for-9-12-year-olds-2015/

These stories look perfect to enjoy at the park or the beach this summer!

Friday, May 29, 2015

Fifth Grade poetry share!

Fifth Grade poetry share!

Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Scenes from our author visit with Henry H. Neff.